主题：[原创]请最后一次帮我点烟

                                                                天空飘满冰雪­

                                                              无法冻结我的思念­

                                                                  告别他乡门前­

                                                              只带走一双双泪眼­

                                                    迷惘的脸上写满了疲惫和失落­

                                                     只有嘴角的烟还在不停的燃­

                                                                     兄弟别送­

                                                               别哭的像个娘们­

                                                         可我自己却也落泪成冰­

                                                   曾经一起摸爬滚打玩命的操练­

                                                         也曾一起叛逆一起疯狂­

                                                             你替我站过夜班岗­

                                                                你说那夜太冷­

                                                            你替我做过病号饭­

                                                              你说你手艺还行­

                                                            睡梦里有你掖被角­

                                                                 梦也暖融融­

                                                       你说都是远离父母的人­

                                                               都需要有人疼­

                                                       苦的时候笑的那么放荡­

                                                       累的时候还在那里逞强­

                                                             你我都说不想家­

                                              可那烟卷却在沉默中闪出迷离的光­

                                                           年轻的心有些轻狂­

                                                         委屈就是暴发的力量­

                                                       充满暴力和嚣张的堕狂野

                                                               我们一起分享­

                                                   这些年咱兄弟的感情刚开头­

                                                             怎么说走就要走­

                                                           望着咱军营的战友­

                                                               端起送行的酒­

                                              彼此心中所有的祝福都在这里头­

                                              再见了我又恨又难舍的这片土地­

                                                              别了我的兄弟­

                                                           说好不流的泪水­

                                                              却已滑落脸庞­

                                                                洗去了钢毅­

                                                        请最后一次帮我点烟­

                                                             掩盖泪的痕迹。。。。。。­

脱下军装，离开军营，战友分别，烟酒诉衷肠。

羡慕当兵的人战友之情。

好诗

战友情深，难舍难分。

一场分别道不尽战友情深谊长；两行热泪流不尽往日美好回忆。

石容易烂，海不易涸。即便海涸石烂，战友之情永存！

                                                           “   别了我的兄弟­

                                                           说好不流的泪水­

                                                              却已滑落脸庞­”

都有过的战友分别，军刀，我都有想流泪的感觉了，写的真好。支持精华

                                                            说好不流的泪水­

                                        却已滑落脸庞­

                                        洗去了钢毅­

                                        请最后一次帮我点烟­

 

 

 

写的真好！

请帮我最后一次点烟